Tuesday, January 28, 2014

Blog due 1/31
Who,what,when,where,how?

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  1. this is the great castle of Lina. Lina is our queen she makes up all the laws.sometimes queen Lina even comes out for a walk. Her guards are very protective they put you in a new home. You came from Asork a King that burnt down your whole Kingdom you will be safe here.

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  2. This is a picture on the internet on a blog. It was here at 11:11 AM. My teacher posted it and it is my homework to post who, what, when, where, and how this happened. That answers all the questions so I am done now.

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  3. This castle is were the royals go to spend their hot summers. I almost went here one summer but then....

    Anyone can add on!

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    1. the road between Sumner and Ur was blocked! The castle is in Ur which is the place I was talking about earlier that is were my grandma lives she is a priest at the royals i wonder how my grandma is doing...

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  4. I am walking by this building when I hear my name called. "Missy!" We in Germany, and this is a castle where one of the ridiculous kings used to live. It is 2025. I live with my brother in a 1K apartment in Tokyo, which is a small and overpriced apartment. I love it, none the less. One other reason to get away from my parents. I turn to my brother, Aaron. "What?" I yell. I look over in his direction and I see some German police wrestling him. "GET AWAY FROM HIM!" I scream at the top of my lungs. None the less, he is beaten to the ground before I get there. One of the other guards comes to me and slaps me across the face and wraps his arms around me as hard as he possibly can. I can't breath, my brother is about to be beaten to death, and I barely know where I am. I finally break away. I go to my brother, and tear him from the guards. I have about a millionth of a second to think what we should do. I look around, and see the water right in front of us. They can't get us there. So, I pull my brother and I into the water. The guards were coming after us, but at the water they stopped. Everyone around us stopped and gasped. Everyone started to whisper in German. Even the guards. I desperately try to hold up my brother so he doesn't sink. He is 24, I am 20. We are the best of friends. He is the only person I am sure I love. Then, just then, I have a flashback of one part of my life.
    "MISSY! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING!"
    "Mom, I didn't try to-"
    "GO TO YOUR ROOM NOW!" She slapped me as hard as she could. My Dad dragged me to my room, and locked me in. My brother was there.
    "We could run away you know."
    "Should we?" He asked. We only looked at each other for a few seconds to decide.
    That was only two years ago.
    I snap back to reality.
    Then one of the German guards yells something to us, and of course, we don't know what it means. Then I look to a sign in front of the water in many different languages. It said, "Sacred water. Please do not touch." Then........

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    1. The ground starts to shake. I feel my heart getting faster and faster. All of a sudden, simultaneously, three cops yell "Wie kannst du es wagen! Sie sind in den Knast!" Which translates to "How dare you! You're going to jail!" in English. I only know that because in high school, our German teacher taught us that exact phase (and of course others), and I used to chase Freshmen down the hall, yelling that in their ears. Then, I realize the ground is shaking, because a stampede of people are running toward us screaming. I start smacking my brother telling him to wake up. How did this happen? Just then my brother starts to wake up.
      "Wh-what's happening? How did we get here? Why are people running toward us?" he says, looking very confused.
      "No time for that! Come on, just run!" I scream.
      We start running for our lives. The water getting deeper and deeper as we run. The cops are calling for backup on their radios (at least I think they are). All of a sudden I trip over something, and hit my head really hard on a rock. My brother went down, too, because I was holding his hand. This is not the day I imagined. Everything just goes black.

      Two hours later:

      I wake up to my brother sleeping on a hospital chair, and an IV beeping close to my ear. Aaron wakes up and says
      "Missy, oh Missy. I'm so glad you're okay!"- I feel the gauze wrapped around my forehead, where I hit my head. "The doctors were worried that you may not live. I talked to one doctor that happened to speak English, he also speaks German. He contacted an English speaking police officer that lives very close to here. He said that he talked to the head chief of the police department, and they decided to drop the charges! We're so lucky we're safe!" he says. I noticed that he is wearing new, dry hospital gown, because his other clothes must've been soaked. The doctor enters the room and gives me a bottle of pills to take home, and releases us. We head back to the airport to fly back to Tokyo, but then a policed officer stops us in our tracks. He grabs us and yells something in German. Then a whole squad of backup cars come. I look at Aaron, as we try to resist getting in the cop car. Suddenly....

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    2. i slipped and started to slip down the big huge hill into a hole in the street

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    3. a big black hole. Scared to open my eyes i notice that its a sewer. Still recovering from my head injury i couldent feel my body. I thought that nothing must of happned when I hit the ground. I got to swipe my head for a sighn of release, but when I look down I wasn't seat from all the running... It was blood. The blood was purple. I dont dont have a big stomach for blood and injuries and all. so of corse, I fainted. Next thing I know I hear sirens from close up. Hessetant to open my eyes, I do and Im not happy what I see. My brother lying right next to me with a long beeping sound comming from his heart moniter. The docter swings a curtain in between us. Nooo! I cry. My brother was my life long friend, untill that life was no longer living. The nurse held me down at my last heart beat, and that was when I notised it was not the nurse, it was my mom. All i remember is in the last 10 seconds of my life were spent telling my mom that i loved her.

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  5. This is the temple of Ethrore - The Great Temple of the west. This is a hidden land. So,simple minded people will not see the temple. This temple is created by a great power that no one knows about. Only the most powerfully minded people can live in there. The others will not be able to see the temple or interact with it. However, the individuals living in the temple are kind and generous in regards to the nature of the world. - The only point which they argue about frequently is who or what created the temple.

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  6. I am the magical king of this gigantic mansion. It's the year 1991 but in the mansion it's 2122. It's located in a secret world above Dusseldorf, Germany. The world started because the magic people wanted their own world.

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    1. cool you should add what the king is like.

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  7. My name is Sasha, I live in this city... I know it doesn't look like a city but it is. I live here with my family. It is quite an odd place, especially it's name...The place were water flows through the temples, it doesn't even sound like a place it sounds like some place that you would describe on a map! Anyway life here is just as odd as the name. If you want to know way we live you will have to learn some family history...now...let's get started.......

    ADD ON......:)

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  8. Hi my name in Annelise. I live in Mesopotamia, Europe. That temple you wonder, that is the ziggart. The top part is were are god lives. It is the wind god and the bottom part is where our king lives. See, we belief that our ruler was chosen by the god himself to be our king.

    Plz add on :)

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  9. Hi, my name is Randy I'm a priest in Sumer. This is one or our many temples. Every day twice a day we worship our god. We believe if we don't worship them we will be punished.

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    1. Like that one time when uncle Joey woke up and forgot to pray, he broke his leg just standing there in the kitchen. That was a strange day. Today while I was praying to Enlil, someone wispered to his friend, "1:00 tonight at the base of the Ziggurat." So dicided to see what they were doing. At 1:00, I saw them talking. I got closer to hear what they were saying, when one of them saw me. I started to run, but tripped over a root! I heard them getting closer and closer......

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    2. They caught up with me and tied me up. They demanded that I told them what I was doing.....

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  10. this is on the internet on blogger and put stuff like when where how and who and what

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  11. I lay in my sweaty bed, dripping, dreaming of my mother being captured in the ancient zigurat. I've been learning about it in school, it's the only thing I think about all day. Nightmares are my biggest worries, they haunt whenever I sleep. Except one day I got captured in one of my dreams and I saw the zigurat with waterfalls at the sides and in the front. It was beautiful, I smile in my bed even though I predict something jumping out at me.

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  12. I sit here in my bed day dreaming about the places I wish I could go or the people I wish I could meet when one day I was sitting there thinking about this place with a waterfall down the middle everything that you would see in a palace that's when it happened I close my eyes make a wish then open them and I........

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  13. Irun along the flower beds feeling my plain brown dress flap around my ankles. I run out of control finally feeling apush on my back as the boys catch up to me. My head is spinning as it hits a tree. . .

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  14. I live in Jerus the most peaceful city in the world. We band all war and love nature. But some people rebel against some of our laws so we are in are in a very tough situation right now. But no matter what we will not fight. Other city's have herd of our crisis and are willing to help. But as the days go by more people hate our city. The worst news yet is our leader Sanson Linet must flee the palace because it is not safe. This made everybody more mad that there leader is not trying to solve the problem but run away from it. I am one of the few people who still believe in peace in our city.
    Today the city next to ours, Sadenor is coming to end these protests in the city but I am not sure it will work, especially because the rebels have weapons now, like spears, knifes, swords, ad other horrible things. THIS WAR MUST STOP!!!!

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  15. We are in the lost city, 500 years ago. Our city is more advanced than any other. We have so much power

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    1. All of the power is what brought the city down. When we were the weakest, rival cities began to attack. We were all taken as slaves and that is where I am now.

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  16. This is my palace. we have lived here for 100 years. this place is all I know. I’ve dreamed of the place outside our city walls. a place were there is secrets waiting to be uncovered. I have to get out there, the place beyond the walls seems to be calling me......


    please uncover the secret.

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  17. who: ferah green
    when: 1542
    where: Rome
    how: i was born here spent my whole life here theres not much places a princess can go.

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    1. but i found in the sewers that you can become best friends with the teenage mutant ninja turtles

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  18. My name is throe the lining god this is my home . in the year 1345 the moth September the day 7th. my home is in the mitell of the sea of monsters. which the human call Bermuda Triangle.

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  19. this was my home until the war this is just a picture it looks like a nuke hit it now.

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    1. Now I am a hobo and i love chocolate and I'm sad so I............

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  20. Who.ferry topia
    When.2937
    where. jojoco
    how. A hippo pulled the city because king fobo threatened he would kill his family if he didn't pull the city to were it is now.

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  21. this is my house in Hawaii before the flood that just happened now it looks like a nuke hit it and we have to live in a tent in till our house gets fixed

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  22. This is my house in vermont I live right next to the wonooski river. It is 95 here and it is 6/29/86. we just had a relly snowy winter. we got 9 feet of snow. We gust had a huge flood...

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  23. Ah home sweet home, hello my name is Ariel I am the princess of this let me say it awesome country called Melody. Let me tell you what I like. well I have black hair with light blue streaks, I like to wear skinny jeans and colorful tank tops. Oh I'm from china and I love to dress in red cloths with special destines on it. Also I like to eat fruit. I have a sis that is older than me by about 2 years and is soon to be the new queen. Her name is Zacapa. Are mommy and papa died in a car crash. We are the only ones left in the family. We live in a place that was built out of a water cave, that is why my balcony has a water fall over it. FYI it is very calming at night. we are in a part of the world you would call now Italy. in the year 1989. we have the best castle my princess friends at school say. And there not that snotty, except Lila lavender. she is a real pig, get it pig LOL Oh well tuff crowd.

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  24. Hi my name is Blaze and im a unicorn. I am the king in a huge palace. I rule unicorn city. In the year 2015 we destroyed the human race and built a new society. Me and my family graze in the gardens on the palace. My two foals are learning how to be king and queen one day.

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  25. My name is Gloria. I'm twelve years old and we are in Rome. We are near a huge temple named Alana. It is 1823 my family likes to travel that is why we are here. I'm really thirsty so I bend down to take a drink from the big pool of water and.................


















































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  26. I am a child that lives in a very rich Mesopotamian city. The ziggurat here is very pretty and expensive, all the people here are very very religious and worship the gods.

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  27. "ANTELINA!" my little sister Merticano yelled. "Merticano I'm up here!" I yelled from my favorite place in the loft we live in Perrsian Palace (sorry i spelled that wrong but i haven't had much of and education). We are being held captive in this wonderful palace by the evil King Hardino he killed my father and my mother is forced to be a maid. I dream that one day my prince will come and save me, but that only happens in fairy tales. Just then I hear a knock on the palace gait! Could it be my prince? I run to the window and there he is prince Gabriel! Is this the moment i have been waiting for? I grab my sister and mother we high jack the helicopter and fly far away to our destiny. I hear the next week that the king was killed by Prince Gabriel.



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  28. This is a Greek temple in Mesopotamian, this temple is used to bring offerings to the gods. My uncles helped to build this temple , for their good work they were rewarded by getting to live in a large greek palace made out of marble. My other uncle was rewarded with wealth, he had so much money.My family couldn't afford to send me to scribe school like I wanted. But my uncle told me it was important for me to learn how to write. He said the pay was good and one day I could use my money to send my children to scribe school.
    Well my teacher told us to finish up so good bye for now.

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  29. " So I was walking to the Webknickens Downtown Mall because I wanted some new Pusheen the Cat earrings at Freedom. So as I'm walking there I see some A.B.C gum and I pick it up. 2 seconds later I bump my head on something and everything goes black. Then I saw rainbows fall across me! I had the feeling that I was falling. And now I am here!" I tell an old person in a ( I think) grain patch. " Well sonny, you landed in the land of Pusheeni!" Watch out for the yellow and brown kitty litter by the way." As he starts combing the kitty litter. Then a giant shadow covers us. " Oh no! It's a..." as the shadow squashes him. I barely jumped out in time when...
    Add on!!

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  30. This is where I live, pretty cool right. But no. you dont get it. This castle is full of slaves and bribery. No Im not a slave. BUt my daddy is. Its not right for a young child to sit and watch my dad get slapped with a whip. And all we eat is slop. BMS-brown mushy stuff. Its not fair that a PRINCESS like me is being treated like a SLOB. Im not a pig for your infromation. Even pigs are treated better than me. I knopw it looks like Im spoiled, but try living with tons of sweaty hairy men working their butts off. plus im the only girl, other than the queen who isnt verry fun to be aroun. so sure wanna trade spaces. yeah thats what i thought...

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  31. I am a Snapple in the castles vending machine just waiting for Emily to buy and drink me Emily passes me and then sees me and backs up I am the flavor peach her favorite kind She puts her dollar in and I fall It didn't feel that good but at least I will get drank She uncaps me and that was the worst pain I have ever felt she put her mouth on me and drank and man was that awkward It fells likes someone's sucking your head She drank me up through me in the trash THE END no happy endings in my story

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  32. I am the building and when the rulers put me her in Italy there was a river running but now it just runs over me. I was put down about 200 years ago

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  33. this is a bullding that is near a river. it is the home of the great mayor of eli village. this house is 100 years old and abandon...

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  34. This is my house or what you would call my big house big house. I have been living here for about my whole life and grew up with my dad and my big brothers. people say i am the toughest girl around and i say it because i have 3 brothers. i also ...

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  35. This is the temple of the gods. My name is Eric and I serve the gods. I have a wife and 3 kids. My job is a hard job we have to plant and grow all our food then give it to the gods.

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  36. my name is emma and i live in this royal manchon and i was in bed one night when i herd a glass jar fall of of the counter, and i knew it was not my mother or father because they are asleep and i do not have any sisters or brothers then i herd foot steps creeking up the stairs i was scared......

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  37. This is my palace called pickle land. And I mean it we are all pickles and everyone eats pickles drinks pickle juice and sleeps pickles. I know its weird that we are pickles and we eat pickles but its not bad. Let me tell you about the story of how I became a pickle. It was when i was about seven years old when I ate my first pickle my Dad had got me at the store. At first I was scared to eat a weird looking thing that I thought was a green sausage, but when he told me it use to be a cucumber I took my first bite. I was so addicted that I refused to eat anything other than a pickle, one day I ate my last pickle in the human world. I was transferred to pickle land. That is the story of how I became a pickle. If you eat to many pickles you turn into one!

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