Monday, February 3, 2014

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Blog due 2/7/14



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  1. This is an ancient Olympic sport called Doenduy. It is like don't die because an army is goes into a dessert temple and tries not to get killed by he scorpions and giant spiders in the old, deserted temple. The last one alive tries to get to people below and they catch the winner but no one has survived that part yet.

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  2. It was back braking work all the time. man a 100,001 man working all the time. it was tabular.

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  3. There are no snakes that's what most people would call lucky butt not me. No fear no terror. That's what people call lucky but what we call scary.


    ( I don't know what to write!)

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  4. I watch s all the priests go up the ziggurat for the every day offering to the gods. Today my family has made me give up all my jewelry that my dead grandmother gave me. you can imagine the fuss I gave. . .










    ADD ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. I was so mad! I didn't even pray for the gods for a week!....

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    2. I can't believe that people give away all their stuff to give to the gods! I need to make a change in this because I can't take it anymore! Next time we have to give stuff to the gods I will have to give away my dolls I made out of cloth with my mom, those are very important to me! Except I know if I protest giving things to the gods I will be punish! And if you are punished in mesopotamia your punishment is BAD I probably will have the opportunity of going to school taken away from me, school is a very important thing to me especially because only people who are wealthy get to go to school and I am one of those people!

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  5. This is a temple where my people go to worship the 7 gods. I watch as the king and several priests climb up the steep stairs to go in the temple, I wish I could go inside the temple, but only kings and priests can go inside. I an going to school to be a scribe, but I'd rather be a priest. My family is leaving to go back to our home. Now is my only chance , I purposely stay back until I can't see my family anymore. I wait for 3 hours before the king and priests file out of the the temple. As soon as they are out of site I run as fast as I can up the stairs. When I get inside I am amazed. Just then I heard a loud rumbling sound behind me. The doors had closed……….

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    1. Now I wish I had listened to my parents! There is no way out I can barely see the air is getting thinner I am on the verge of fainting like in a dream but then I hear the voices of demons. They are gonna take me to their leader

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  6. It is Summer here, in Mesopotamia. Right now you are looking at the Ziggurat Tower. My people and I come here to worship the gods, and to feast with them. I have brought some of my fresh-baked bread, as well as some fresh fruits and vegetables, to worship the gods. Here in Mesopotamia we worship 7 gods. The 7 gods are: Earth, Sky, Sun, Moon, Salt Water, Fresh Water, and Wind. The calendar says the next flood will be very soon. I just hope and pray that my crops will make it through this month.

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  7. This is our Ziggurat we worship our seven gods here. One god lives at the top of it. only the priests are allowed at the top.

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  8. There are 7 gods. wind, sky, wind, salt water, fresh water,sun, and moon.
    they all protect us from.....


    please add on

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  9. this is the ziggurat that the Mesopotamia worship

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  10. the towns people are going to worship the gods at the zigurot

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    1. The camo bunnies from the village in the other blog are now at the top of this ziggurat. They have the Narwal as their flying unit. And for our flying unit we have the giant flying turtles with castles on their backs from the older blog. And Hannah is riding one of the turtles when all of a sudden, a flying Narwal shoots her down. She was screaming "THE NARWAL KILLED ME! THE NARWAL KILLED ME!!"


      ADD ON PLEASE!!! ;)

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  11. I see my dead corpse below me. I am rising higher and higher into the clouds. The ground getting smaller and smaller. Try to see the last parts of the war, but then the clouds cover it up. I see ahead of me, a tunnel of clouds with a razor fan. I see the woman ahead of me. When she touches the fan with her finger, she explodes into a cloud of gold dust and gets sucked up the fan. I pray I could just be back in that lifeless body. Then everything was black. A flash awakens me on a sandy ground. People are around me wearing turbans and robes. They are in a long line to that temple, and I'm at the front. I see a angel in front of me with a halo. " Oh Poop." As she comes towards me...


    Add on! <3

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  12. (ths has kind of nothing to do with the pic but i felt like writing it so i am going to relate to it)
    (girls are screaming)

    "As long as you love me
    As long as you love me
    As long as you love me

    We're under pressure,
    seven billion people in the world trying to fit in.
    Keep it together,
    smile on your face even though your heart is frowning
    But hey now, you know girl,
    We both know it's a cruel world
    But I will take my chances

    As long as you love me
    We could be starving, we could be homeless, we could be broke
    As long as you love me
    I'll be your platinum, I'll be your silver, I'll be your gold
    As long as you love, love me, love me
    As long as you love, love me, love me
    I'll be your soldier, fighting every second of the day for your dreams girl
    I'll be your Nova, you can be my Destiny's Child on a scene girl
    So don't stress, don't cry, we don't need no wings to fly
    Just take my hand

    As you love me we could be starving, we could be homeless, we could be broke
    As long as you love me
    I'll be your platinum, I'll be your silver, I'll be your gold
    As long as you love, love me, love me
    As long as you love, love me, love me

    I'll beat you there
    Girl you know I got you
    Us, trust...
    A couple of things I can't spell without you
    Now we are on top of the world, 'cause that's just how we do (do)
    Used to tell me sky's the limit, now the sky's is our point of view (view)
    Man now we stepping out like Whoa! (Oh God)
    Camera's point and shoot,
    Ask me what's my best side, I stand back and point at you you you
    The one that I've argue with, I feel like I need a new girl to be bother with,
    But the grass ain't always greener on the other side,
    It's green where you water it
    So I know,we got issues baby true true true
    But I'd rather work on this with you
    Then go ahead and start with someone new
    As long as you love me

    As long as you love me
    We could be starving, we could be homeless, we could be broke
    As long as you love me
    I'll be your platinum, I'll be your silver, I'll be your gold
    As long as you love, love me, love me
    As long as you love, love me, love me
    I'll be your silver, I'll be your gold
    love me, love me, love me
    As long as you love, love me, love me
    As long as you love, love me, love me
    As long as you love me`~

    Their are about 7 billion people here at the last concert of the believe tour in london. know that i am here i think that i will be never be able to hear again because everyone is screaming so lound. I am just standing here jumping and singing along with justin thinking that this day could not get any better intel i see jane coming in my direction looking at me. (jane is the girl who works with justin and picks the one less longly girl each show)

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    1. (this goes with my other entry)
      Open up to me, it's all you gotta do
      Give me all your heart, swap mine out with you
      Swap it out with you
      Swap it out with you
      Come into my world
      I gave my world to you
      We can swap swap swap it out
      I can show you what I'm talking about
      Be obliged just to show you how
      Follow my lead, that's what you oughta do
      No pressure
      Swapping out ain't ever been a crime
      If it was then I'd do the time
      Throw away the keys as long as I'm here with you
      Forever
      Eye for an eye
      Remember when I told you
      Wipe your pretty eyes, dry 'em on my shoulder
      You ain't gotta try, try to get closer
      Fifty-fifty deal lets make a deposit,
      Simulate the love
      Try it 'for you knock it
      You ain't gotta rush
      But you ain't gotta stop it.....

      i am screaming so loud the lyrics to swap it out that i can harly here jane talking to me. i cant help the fact that my haert it pounding just being able to talk to here and not even conctrating onn what she is saying. Even before i know it jane grabs my hand and we head into the backstage section. i burst into tears when i start the her the start of ollg.

      Alright, let's go
      There's gonna be one less lonely girl
      (One less lonely girl)
      One less lonely girl
      (One less lonely girl)
      There's gonna be one less lonely girl
      (One less lonely girl)
      One less lonely girl....... i am just thinking how i a going to be out there intell know..........................

      (sorry its probaly not the best blog entry but i felt like typing jdb stuff so the you go. and dont ask why i did like the whole song lyrics because idk why i did)

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  13. This is the ancet temple. We are all looking up there because there are people with bombs up there. "Ioga bahara ghari!" (means watch out people in Hindi) We all move away as...


    plz add on <3

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  14. I look up to this temple in front of me. I am in Egypt, visiting here from my home in Copenhagen, Denmark. All these Egyptians are criticizing me for my white with black polka dot jeans and black shirt, and it is getting really annoying. I have made zero friends, and just about a million enemies. I don't know why, but they must have something against Denmark. My name is Paula. I am originally from Paris, then I moved to NYC for 5 years, and now I am in Copenhagen. Even though it is cold and the light scheduled is weird, I love it none the less. I am visiting Egypt to get away from my crazy life in Denmark, being a famous author and all. Do these Egyptians even read? God, they annoy me. Anyways, I am here with my twin brother, Paul. I almost never see him, with me moving to the US for college and then to Denmark. I guess he likes home. So right now I am having a little down time with him. Then, this random old man comes up to me and punches me. I looked at him with a surprised look, but before I could get him back, my brother was at him. I swear it was the fist fight of the century. I tries to pull them away from each other, but all that resulted in was another nice punch in the face. Then of course, some police just came and bullied us into their cop cars, all of us mushed in the back. After a while we pulled into a court house. Well, here goes.
    The court house was a total rip off. None if us knew the language they were speaking. It turns out the guy in the fist fight was from named Erik. he was from Toronto, Canada, so we could understand each other. Not so much my brother, since he never really had a reason to learn English.
    After the worthless Court trip, my brother and Erik went to the hospital, since they were so hurt. I don't know why they we were taken there first, since we were all bleeding. I was put into A room with my brother, and it turns out my cheek bone and jaw was cracked. My brother was a lot worse. His eyes were scratched, and blood covered almost his whole face. Wow, those Egyptians must really hate us for not taking us here before.
    Some how that Erik guy barely got hurt. He came in once to apologize, but I am sure that was staged. He had to stay here for a little while to do therapy.

    Two weeks later:

    I woke to our door opening. I tried desperately to look around, but it was pitch black. Then, I heard a trigger pulled, my brother screaming. I screamed. I jumped out of my bed, and ran to the direction of where the person was.
    "I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU! WHY WOULD YOU DO SUCH A THING! I HATE YOU MORE THAN ANYTHING!" I screamed again and again. Doctors came rushing in, and when they turned on the light, I saw the mass murderer. It was Erik. Why would he do that? What did he have against me in the first place to do that?
    I went over to my brother, dead. I couldn't believe it. My wonderful, handsome twin. How? He was only 26. I brushed back is blonde hair, and stared at his lifeless green eyes. We were almost the same. Now though, he was gone. I couldn't stop crying.

    Although Erik didn't kill me physically, he killed the girl inside of me. I was nothing but a body now.

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  15. My name is Machmoud, I'm the one with the small red hat. I live in Ur and I have traveled for six days to get here to join in the gathering for the gods. This kind of gathering happens three times a year. It happens when the sun goes in front of the moon. Every one brings food to share. First we do prayers and then there is music and dancing. After that I go on my six day journey home.

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    1. Oh, and the giant building you see is the Ziggurat. I always am amazed at this gigantic building. I have alwase wanted to go inside,but only priests and important peopl are let inside. As I gawk, I hatch a plan...

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    2. I will burn down the blacksmiths shop. Then the hole town will go to that. Then I will sneak in. And see what no one has seen but priest.

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  16. I am Calli, I am a sumerian and I live in this village in mesopotamia. This is the famous Zigerat, and everyone gathers around it to celebrate the new year!!!!

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  17. This is the Ziggerot temple. My name is Sasha and im 13. We Mesopotamian's go once a week to worship the 7 gods. We always bring food for the gods. Today I brought a loaf of bread and some dates. As I head up o the top of the tower I hear a scream, and then nothing. I run to the top and see no one. I look into the room and see a man leaning over another man. "What happened" I ask. The man looks up and I see blood all over his face. He moaned and stand up. we limps over to me and tries to grab my arm. I scream and run down the steps. I run to my house and grab a club, to arm my self ( on the way home I saw two more zombies). I tack my horse quickly and ride out of the town. I have been riding for two hours now and im getting very dehydrated. I get of my horse when I her a loud grunt. I look behind a bush and see a hoard of zombies. I scream as one grabs my arm and another grabs my shirt. I try to fight but I soon get tired. Right as Im going to give up I fell a hand on my shoulder. I see a man on a horse and I climb on. We reach a little village and the man tells me it is safe. I finally calm down and look for my mom and dad. I find them and we start a new life.

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    1. in Ur it is very nice here but hot and humid all the time. The saddest thing is my horses were eaten by the zombies and I miss them a lot but life goes on I guess. Now I have 5 horses. 1-Zoey 2-Bethany 3-Samantha 4-Jack and 5-Liam. We have a happy life in Ur .

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  18. I'm the person that's up close this temple I spent 90 years working on and that temple is called...

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  19. My name is Joe and I am in mesopatamia. At the top is were the gods live in a temple at the top of the zigerat.

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  20. my name is Emma and I my in mesopotamia and we are looking at the ziggerot it is cool. The ziggerot is where the 7 gods live.

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  21. My name is Addison, I live in Egypt its hot here and very hard to get around.

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  22. on the blog thinking about how to write a song.

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  23. this is where i live here and my names amanda im the mayors daughter.this palace is located in the southern hemephire.Here they have an anual "games" you never know whats gonna be in the games but they set up a bow shooting range and they see who has the most points and send the winner to the capital... I cant belive it whenI actualy WIN!!!its an amazing privlage but when i see the people im agenst and the areana...
    (ADD ON PLEASE!)

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  24. My name is Peter I am a scribe I don't mean to brag or anything but... I am the kings favorite he says I am his number one scribe. So of course he picked me out of the bunch to come to the meeting at the Ziggurat where the king and the priest work and worship. In our culture we believe in 7 gods and we belive that they watch over us and punish us when we go against their will. I was wearing my favorite red cap when I came up to the Ziggurat but something was wrong all the priest were huddled up together weeping?Over a dead body?! It was the king he had no pulse and he was cold his face turning a light shade of purpleish green. "What has happened?" I asked. One of the priests turned to me and said "The king took a sip from his glass and just fell over instantly." I had a hunch that lead me to the kitchen of a small home where all the food and drink was prepared for the priest and the king that entered the ziggurat. Just last week the father of the home was sentenced to death by the king because he didn't cook the meat enough. Which made the mother of the house very angry and if I was right hungry for revenge...... Dundundundun

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  25. I am a criminal. I am being put on trial in the Ziggurat for stealing precious joules. I don't know what will become of me.

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  26. my name is Joe and I live in massopotiana this is a temple where I live this is where the kings live and I have always wonted to live there

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  27. My name is Conner. This is the Ziggurat were everyone comes and gathers to sacrifice everything we have to our 7 gods. The priests take everything bit by bit. The only thing I have left is this shark tooth necklace my great grand father gave to me. It means everything to me and I will do what ever it takes to keep it from them.

    Add on! :)

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  28. This is a good movie. It's very old too. I think it's from 1976. Oh, I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Arugula. You know the sound a car makes. Arooogala. I'm watching this movie. On a five by 12 foot panorama tv. Suddenly I hear a smash and bullet comes through the tv...gotta go now.

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  29. We've been building this building for awhile now. Everyday it's same thing passing the brinks or gold up to the top to keep the building process going. I myself and on the ground. Every man in the village and villages surrounding have to help build this. People has there's a new King coming some think it's for a new god that we need to worship and feed every day. But some where right it was a new King the last King had just died and they needed a new King to role the villages. No one new who the new King was going to be, the priest's and guards and staff of the palace had to search for the right one. That's when it happened I was passing a brick when some handed me a letter. It send on the top to the King that's when I realized that wanted me as King........ My family will be so proud!!!!

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  30. they shoot at the ancient temple of Snapple rulede by Emily who in her free time rides narwhals they shoot one bullet and yummy liquid flows out NOOO NAOT MY SNAPPLE yells Emily so Emily does a round off back hand spring back tuck with a triple twist on there faces and yells AINT NOBODY TOUCH MY SNAPPLE the end

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  31. I am in the hanging gardens of Babylon. We have came from Sumer and we wanted to see the beautiful garden. We try to keep our gardens like this but it is very hard in the dry weather.

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  32. i am in egept an the pyramyds are being made

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  33. Bang! thew door shut and im trapped inside this castle. noone is here exept the spirits of ghosts

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  34. There it is I say happily as I look at the amazing site. Then suddenly the place collapses and then I see the fires.

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  35. Finally we spot the amazing ziggurat. It is a beautiful sight. We travelled 9 hours to see this now we get to travel into it and see the amazing temple of the gods.

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  36. I am the king I an going to the zigarat temple to do my weekly pray I am gong to pray so I do not want be disturbed

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  37. this is where me and my family worship our gods, this is called a Ziggurat an temple in the middle of our city. This temple is very very big and people are always around trying to worship our god. My father is the king of Babylon and I am allowed in when ever I want, except in the god temple at the top because only the priest and my father can go in. I can also not touch anything because my brother touched the first wheel that has ever been made and it broke. My father was very mad. This is my favorite place to be in the whole city.

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