Wednesday, January 21, 2015

Blog 1/22 What will my new ships bring back? Who am I?

   At my school I have developed a new type of ship called the caravel. The reason for such a creation? Because the ships in use right now are terrible for navigating! They are much too slow and too heavy. The new ships I have recently sponsored are lighter and more maneuverable; I hope these ships will allow my sea captains to travel further and faster. I am about to dispatch some of these ships to the coast of Africa and I cannot wait for the results they will bring back!



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  1. I am Fordac, and I am the first Captain to sail this new fangled art piece of a ship. I had my doubts, but this Caravel is unimaginably manoeuvrable. We have been to another continent and back, with no trouble at all. My crew and I are just about back. There has been a storm brewing, but I hope we will make it back to the harbour before it sets in. Suddenly, I here an earth shattering boom, and see a blinding flash of light. The storm has set in much faster than I though! The wind started to pick up, and huge waves started crashing against the ship.....

    Please Continue This Story!!!!!!!!

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    1. I see your ship in the distance Fordac and I am hoping that the next big wave destroys you, your ship and your crew! I have heard of your journeys and the incredible wealth and treasure you have brought back for your royal family! I await your demise so that I can benefit from your hard work. Some call me a pirate,what do you think, hahahahaha!!!

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    2. Yo Fordac bro, take your crew onto my ship we got plenty of room I will bring you to your destination. Oh yea i`m Addison the llama wrangler. If you want to come to Asia with me and my crew we have a fleet... Continue the story

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    3. This ship has brought me nothing but bad fortune I swear its cursed.I bought it from a nice women in the harbor she said it was the newest technology that it went so fast and was very light weight.When my crew and I went to take it out for the first time it sprung a leak in the front end and we sunk my crew and I had to swim it back to our dock.The second time we took the ship out a huge storm came and we nearly died.The third time we took it out a ship ramed us in the rear and we capsized.After that I figured it was horrible luck to own the bout so I sold it to and unknowing man named Fordac

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    4. I think that my crew and I will perpair for battle. We have valuble cargo and I plan to bring it back for my roal family. For my wife has a heir to the throne. I will bring my cargo to my family. And nothing will stop me.

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    5. I told him it had never been sailed that it was brand new but I told him nothing of the curse

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  2. my ship is about to explode. where we keep are exposes is on fire. there is only one way out me and my men must sue are life dot. boom. the setter of my ship explode. all of are life dots are gone.
    "jump" i yell
    and we jump we fund a big pest of my ship. only 5 men serve. the next day a ship find us.


    to be continue

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  3. the ship is a very old ship yet it my go of course if it does then were will it go?????????

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    1. Your ship could go any where Asia, England, Newfoundland, North America ect.

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    2. I think the ship is going get jewels from another king from a far off land but on the way a big sea monster attacks you and you ship is wrecked so you have to swim all the way to the nearest island....TO BE CONTINUED

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  6. The ship drags as the storm go slowly. We through the war powder in the shredding rain troughs us of are feet. we all hear the ship crack as we ponder jumping of the ship. we swim with tears as the ship sink faster that the acre would any day.

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  7. I see land about one hundred yards away to the northeast me matey R lets grab the to shovels and dig for some treasure to bring back home to our territory back in green land and trade for so food.

    please continue if you want

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    1. "The gold will go to us cruu and the captain!"
      "No all the gold is ares!"
      "No the gold belongs to the captain to!"
      "THE GOLD BELONGS TO ME THE CAPTAIN!" ((( FOOSH the doer fly’s open)))

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  8. they will bring back loot and...

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    1. they will also bring back j hems and jewels

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  9. I am the legendary Mycath. Great inventor. I just invented a lighter, faster ship which Captain Vega is testing out. He is sailing to Africa, which is long trip. I want him to back gold FOR ME. I will await for news of him. Will he parish or will he live and bring back gold for me.



    A week later:
    Captain Vega and his crew have perished!(Along with The Caravel!) :( I will never be the rich man I have dreamed to be! I guess this is what I get for being greedy. I have enough money! Why was I so greedy?! There are plenty of poor people in this country. I should have wished for money fro them! DUHN DUNH DUN DUUUNN. What is this? A pot of gold has just landed in front of me. I rushed out on to the streets and looked in all the alleys for poor people, handing them gold. Now I am know as Mycath the generous.

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  10. I just invented the caravel and set it off to Africa. I can't wait until it gets back! I hope my sailor will bring back loot ,gems and gold! what will he bring back? will he survive? Will he bring new people? What will happen

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  11. My name is Finta. I have developed the new Caravel, It's designed to be lighter, faster, and better for navigating. I hear Prince Henry Might be using it for the trip his men are going on to the Indies. I hope they come back victorious.
    My dream has always been to travel the world, and Prince Henry has always been my idol.

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    1. What would you bring back on your ship if you went to the Indies?

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  12. we will bring back the loot and we can ride the better ship unlike those slow and rusty ships

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  13. The ship goes fast when the wind and water corporate's, to bad for us neither is cooperating. We've been blown off course to a island, but some how no one thought to bring a map,how do you forget to bring a map on a boat to sail across the seas?!
    I sick of the boat so I walk And wander around the island.Turns out the island is practically a zoo, theres cats cheetas tigers zebras, lions wolfs and tarantulas and i might have to take some home

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  14. You will find riches and spices in the Indies and other great places. You will go to the Americas and get carrots. Boatloads of Carrots.

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  15. Sorry to break it to you, but this ship is mine. I am a viking called Deadly Daggersson. I have taken over this fleet and have moved all my weaponry onto the ships, and am going to take over Iceland! Mwahahahahahah!!!!! Everyone shall bow down to me!

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  16. this is the fastest est ship on the market with 900 horse power sails her we go

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  17. " This ship is so magnificent and spacious. I could sail all around the world non stop with all this food storage. It is so light weight and manoeuvres quickly and has such beautiful carvings. " I knew this ship was to good to be true it must be cursed because here comes the Kracken", I scream. Thunk! The ship slaughters the Kracken as acid blood spatters everywhere. Crash! Rocks bash through the boards water rushes in sinking the caravel..... finish the story if you like

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  18. I am Kyan the great. I am the maker of this magnificent ship. We plan to set sail to Africa and trade with merchants for loot and spices. The only question is if this ship will work. Although I am quite confident that the waves will not sink it to the ocean depths like many have before. I am bringing aboard 12 other sailors with me. They all know that there lives are at risks but the possibilities that await us are absolutely wonderful. I must leave now for it is time to board the ship.

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  19. its a muggers ship it carrys tied up humans left to bleed to death

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  20. My ship will bring back gold, and foo,d like vegetables, and meat. I am a person no one knows who I am because I came from a river in a small ship. A commoner found me and helped me. She did not know my name she raised me with out a name. I have dark eyes they look like black but they are brown I have brown hear with blond streaks all around. I am a girl people think I am a boy because I play like one and do what they do I do not where a dress only pants and shirts.

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  21. I have returned from my trip to Africa. I have brought many spices and creations. Knowledge has started to get around the land about the amazing inventions we have discovered. Also the many things that the inventions carry is skill, knowledge, and wealth. I could not of done it without this wonderful ship. Even if its slow the boat is also very strong and can carry objects in long distances.

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  22. January 15, 1499

    We cruised on till morning, finally my brother came back into the kitchens and sat down on a small stool. The boat swayed gently but below deck know one seemed to notice. My name is April Tang my, I'm around 15 years old, I have strait brown hair and green eyes. My older brother Calvin works on the ship that we were on at the moment. He's a sailor with big muscles and a even bigger ego, he also has green eyes and brown hair but is tan and slightly freckled. I was a cook on the ship, and that of course meant that I was usually below decks while my brother was above flirting with the higher class girls and doing his job at the same time, but mostly flirting...........

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  23. The new boats that we are using to sail to the coast of Africa are much easier to navigate the seas. With these ships being much lighter they are much faster then the other boats that we used. Getting to Africa will be much easier now!

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  24. The ship carry’s food and wine for the Queen of england

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  25. The caravel returns! It has been awhile of waiting, thanks to the treacherous storms at sea. I am one of the creators of this ship, so it is only right I share a small portion of the treasures and goods traded from Africa. I watch as the crew unloads many boxes. I hope that the ship did not face dangers to harsh, but by the looks and condition of the boat, I see a ship that has seen a brutal storm at sea. I peer into one of the boxes, and see lots of bottled spices that make my eyes water. In the next box, there is an assortment of vegetables I cannot recognize. They have not seen my garden yet, or any other garden in my town. I hope for fortune such as gold and precious gems for my family, and sure enough, another of the boxes contain shining metals and sparkling silver. I am thankful that I helped build this ship, because soon I will be taking home some of these goods.

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  26. I am Semtrow the sea raider. I rule this black rocky island in the Atlantic with my army of raiders that look like orks from the new hobbit movie. I walk out of my cave covered in gold and I heer something, it's the waves rebounding off the rocks. That means a ship.

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  27. my ship will bring back gold and lots of treasure and lots of weapons and food for my kingdom and now we can upgrade and bask in glory and be happy we have what we have.

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  28. I am Thorin I sent my dwarves and Hobbit aka my burglar out to get treasure from my old castle. what I got was gold, diamonds chains, and the Arken stone.

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  29. The amazing Caravel has returned. Everyone thinks that I have invented it! Well let me tell you a little secret the Caravel was a long lost ship. It once sailed the seven seas. It was a very important ship. It was used for transporting goods, fishing, and more. At one point the Caravel was owned by pirates. And even before that it was sailed across the seven seas by vikings.

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  30. I am the evil pirate, Yahoymatey, and I have stolen your magical waggon that you land-lovers call mini-vans. It is a lot better than my old crappy ship I called The Caravel (it had one to many sails). Now I seek the treasure cabin you land-lovers call The Bank.

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  31. I'm a sailor that sail's on old ships I want to sail on this new ship to see what its like. The new ship will bring back food, spices, treasure, wood, wood sculptures, and pottery.

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  32. My ship was tip meharety. now I am going in a rock.Noooooo. I just was going to die instead of dieing I was saved as my ship sack it was heart breking because all my money was on there then

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  33. A lonley old sailor could use some adventure... Right? I had jumped on the oprotunity as soon as I heard about the "new and improved" ships. I knew that if the ships relly were better I would be able to explore new places no one else had heard of. Not to forget and the knowledge it would bring me. I strived for knowledge. To me knowledge was more valuable then jewls and riches, and to be able to share the knowledge would be a gift

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  34. There is a ship that is coming back from China with a lot of loot.

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  35. this is the ship that sailed the ocean blue. the boat that C.C sailed on to accidentally discover America. and made history!

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  36. The Ship has food for family and riches for royals.
    Oh no that boy is steeling the trove of treasure.

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  37. This new ship influenced by Prince Henry the Navigator's fishing boat shall help me and my crew explore, and maybe reach the riches of china!
    I've heard stories that this new ship is light weight and has 2 to 3 masts maybe even 4 with lateen sails. The ship was told to be 12 to 18 meters long at carry an average 40 to 50 tons. This shall be amazing to use! This boat is fast and should get us there in a faster rate then any other should, I will be able to carry most riches that we find on what I to be a way to get to China. Until any other boats are invented I feel this boat shall be the best of the 15000.

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  38. (information about the caravel was partly found on (Wikipedia Caravel))

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  40. The sway of the ship is rhythmic and makes me relaxed. I love these days, just being with the family on our boat. It's a new model that I made 5 months ago. It took a while to build but it was worth it. We can go faster than any other ship, which is perfect. We can find new land faster and be praised for it. Oh yes. I can see it now...
    The abrupt splash of water from the deck goes into my toes. Very cold saltwater! It is beautiful out, the sun shining, but its only March. Not ideal swimming weather. I turn to see my little brother holding a water bucket.
    "Timothy!" I shout.
    "Uh oh." He says. "Brother is angry."
    "No duh I am! I'm gonna tell Mom!"

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  41. This is one of the three ships that Cristopher Columbus had to sail to China. King Ferlander and Queen Ilisabeth of Spain funded for the trip. We are half way to China and the men on the boats are getting rowdy.

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  42. We are on a boat, a big beautiful boat with a lot of sails and cool gold decorations. I am a sailor and a sailor has got to sail.

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  43. The ship is going to King Ferdinand and Queen Isabella Kingdom.

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  44. i am on one of c.cs ships spocered by king Ferdinand.

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  45. its going to a magical sweet tea land where the capybaras rule the land

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  46. Why are they making it smaller? It may be ruff to steer but it can hold alot more resources.

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  48. If I was on that ship I would take a trip on it

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  49. i THINK THIS SHIP IS CURSED and never will die inless someone rides the ship but the ship is so scare no one wants to go on it.




    TO BE CONTINUED

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  50. This ship as been in my mind since childhood. Now the last step is to build it.
    this is the best design the world has ever see and no ship built like this will ever fail to meet its destination.

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  51. I think that the one ship is only going to make it out finer than the others

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  52. The ship would bring back men and women. and girl and boys

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  53. The boat brings back many memories from my childhood. It shall be sent to Africa and bring back men, women, boys, and girls. this is a ship that will never sink!

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