Friday, March 11, 2016

First 2016 blog entry!


You are climbing the steps to enter this amazing building. What happens next?
You entry needs to be at least 3 sentences and you need to do your best at editing your work.
Have fun with this,you may use someone else's post to comment on.

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  1. I walk in with three friends...
    Celestia, Cora and Poppy. My name is francheskia selono forester. We are adventures. We study the past and its secrets. The last place we went was the great Nile river, before that we went to to the great race of homo sapians. We are now at the... Wait if I tell its a spoiler. Okay back to my adventure story, when we were walking in the halls, the lights were all lit up. The smell of dank and dank musk fill the air was present. We had walked 5 steps then whoosh! The light to our ringt went out, then the left all the way down to the end of the hall. Then I realized that we were separated. Later after feeling my way around I found Celestia we couldn't find Cora, but we found Poppy. We were worried out of our minds. Then we found a trail of water, the water stared as a crystle blue but started getting darker. We followed it till we came apone a pile of old bones. We now new why the water got darker. We hopped it wasn't Cora, we walked a little further and then we started to hear it. First it sounded like angels ringing little bells then it became more raspy and shreek ish. We followed it to a door, we tryed to open the door then.... BAM! We were swinging in mid air, there was a net around us, we were trapped. We never faced this many traps in an advenchure before. In this place you have to watch your step.

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    1. I pulled out my "adventure sack" grabbed my pocket knife and cut a hole in the net, when we got out Poppy and I went through the only passage way we could find. This passage was lit and damp, as we grew closer to the end of the hallway we started to hear whimpering we instantly knew it was Cora she was scraped up really bad. I took out my "adventure sack" again and we bandaged her up, we were talking for maybe 30 seconds before we desided enough was enough and we wanted to get of here as fast as we could. About 15 minutes later we made it out and hiked back to our house and told my mom the whole story, I always loved the way she listens to our story she stares you right in the eyes and stays completely still oh by the way my moms name is Heidi and my dad passed 11 years ago he would always come on the adventures with us we would have so much fun. So this is what my Sunday ended up being like, and I will never forget it

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    2. Wow, great story! Thanks Ellett and Cole!!

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  2. by nic lord

    my name is well thats not important what is is that Im a touerist and Im exploring this temple in africa it dosnt look that presentable but its supost to be very cool.

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  3. My story is how the three kid's get out of the temple. And there names are Bob, Mary, and Johnny. the wonder of in the middle of the desert and they find a temple that looked scary. They all looked at each other with adventure in there eyes, they then wondered into the temple looking at nice sculptures and a living room and weird looking they walked a little more and there was a guy rely tall with nice hair and body muscles Mary said. he turned around and we all said it's ranaldo the soccer player. We waled down into his trophy room... to be continued.

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  4. hello I the achent tower troll, I live in here! yea you would thing that with all the traps you cant live here yea you could be right but I own this place, at lest I thank, I love it here there is gold, bones... uh well theres not much really, no one is really ever around and the ones who are, are not really ether here often or are in a trap, well looks like a ball trap has actevated! Good luck!!!

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  5. As I trudge up the steep, stone stairs of this magnificent temple I think what is inside? What will I find? I don't know but I will soon. Walking up the last step of the first flight my knees start to tremble and my face swells with heat. I start to think this temple isn't so magnificent. 20 minutes later and I'm at the top and drenched with sweat. When I walked in there was refreshing, cool air, the lighting was very dim. I looked to my right, there was nothing to see at all. I turned my head to the left slowly, but something was different I saw a small twinkle then I heard a rush of water buzzing on my ears. A door slid open, I cautiously walked in, the rushing water sound stopped. There was a stand in the middle of the room it had a golden grail filled with small bags of spices and salt. There was a pool of water behind the stand, I walked over and there in the wall was a jewel. When I turned around and the grail was gone. The temple started to crumble, I stood there in shock.

    To be continued...

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    1. I saw that I accidentally stepped on a rock right under the jewel. I started to panic, and the ceiling started to cave in by the weight. Then suddenly, a man ran from behind the jewel...

      To Be Continued.

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  7. I walk up the stairs during the day and the sun is out above us, on a very hot day. By the time I get up the stairs I am exhausted and sweaty, but by the time I get inside I cool down instantly. The shade inside gives a cooling affect, I grab the touch that is on the wall to light my way through the tunnels to come.

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    1. And then I walk into the tunnel and in the tunnel I find another tunnel and I go down the tunnel.I stop and look around me there is nothing but walls.I try to go back but I cant my torch goes out and it is pitch black.

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  8. BANG! BOOM! CRASH!... Wait, wait, wait. Why am I starting here? This makes no sense!
    Ok, so ... my name is Julia. I'm 27 and I have a Bachelors degree in English and a Masters degree in Education. In short, I'm an Language-Arts Teacher. I spend my time teaching 'enthusiastic' 7-8 graders. But don't get me wrong, it isn't that I don't like my job, just, it's a bit tiring. With all the 'blah', 'blah', 'blah', (had to leave, to be continued

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    1. So, I decided to get away from the chaos for a bit and have some good old fashioned adventuring. But really, how did I even find this place and get here?! It's 2016 for crying-out-loud! Anyway,that brings us to today. I'm not going through all the boring plane ticket booking, airport hubba-jubba, landing,getting to my hotel, and finally getting here. That would take forever. Now then, where were we? AH! right...BANG! BOOM! CRASH! 'WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING!' I half scream half shout as I slowly stand up becoming level with the ancient looking man standing in front of me.

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  9. Me and my friends were about to walk the stairs the pure ancient past. Hi my name is Parker. And my friends are:Zoe, Eli,and Calvin. We make it up the first 20 stairs when we start to get to get tired. We made it up all the stairs when we heard a very faint scream in the building, through the main hallway."What was that!"I said."I don't know, but we should check it out."Said Calvin."C'mon!"I said.....To be continued, Donn, Donnnn, Donnnnnnnnnnnn

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    1. Well that was a weird Indian with a truck tattoo on her left cheek and that guy wearing tree stump on his butt. At least that wasnt a dieing person.no!!!!!!! I said

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    2. I think you took it a bit too far.....

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    3. Nathaniel, I agree with Britta. I don't think your comments help the story along.

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  10. waking up the steps of the magifusint strutter it is like waking up a giant
    hill. when you enter it it dork you have a little shiver in you.when i wen't in and never came out because it's so butefol.

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  12. As I walk up the 8 mile long stairs I think to myself what will I do when I get to this palace, will it be dark or bright? Will it be hot or cold? I will never know when I final reach the top of the stairs I look back and see the 8 mile long stairs, I say wow just wow. I pushed open the huge 7 foot door with the little energy I have left in my body and then I see a little light in the middle of the room I was curious to find out what it was so I walked over to it thinking this is cool and when I do I heard a noise I will never forget, It was a baby crying I turn around to see a little baby in front of me I think to myself and realize that I haven't been here for a long time where did this baby come from I pick it up and the door slams shut whoosh!! I scream in terror soon I realized that this wasn't the museum I wanted to come to this was a horrible place to be at. A screen with a person poped up and said the, first one of all of you 4 have 3 days to find your way out of this 20 mile land and if you do it successfully you will be named the new best person of the world and then it all went black, except for me and that baby I was holding and the little light from the door saying exit, first I said to that little baby your name is now Hope then I looked around and stumbled a crossed a table that had food on it that could last 4 days and the baby food would only last 1 hour so I had to go out to find more food for the little one then I went in to the hall and saw a kitten I had to keep it that night I woke up to a alarm saying its time to wake up its 12:00 I got up and held the baby and played with the kitten I found food for the baby for the rest of the 3 long days. I walked for what it seemed like was 6 hours and still nothing but little lights, three hours I took a break and a bottle of water dropped from the ceiling I grabbed the cat and the baby and we went to bed on the ground the next day I walked forever I heard footsteps and got really scared but I pushed that down in my stomach for Hope and carried on, Someone was walking to me I could almost see them and when I got closer I saw her she was weak and fragile I asked her would you like anything she said food I kindly gave her the rest of my food for tomorrow and it turned into night time my kitten bill was tired so was Hope so we went to bed, the stranger slept near us but not to close the next day at morning I looked for my food and forgot that I have gave it to the lady but that was OK soon Hope started to cry I said..... to be continued

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  13. My friend and I walked up tons of steps. Then we got to the top the inside walls were made of pure gold then after a bunch of running around we found the kitchen, every thing was gold. We open the cabinets then there it was... The galaxies largest stash of chips,American candy, and a bunch of mountain dew. My friend and I were shocked then we took a bunch of the candy and then finally found a game room. We look around there are arcade machines every where then we kept on looking.. there are air hockey tables and then we look straight in front of us there was the worlds largest T.V with all of the gaming consoles in the world my friend and I moved our beds into the gaming room. We stayed up all night playing on the games and eating candy. Then are moms came in, they told to brush our teeth and stop eating the junk food but we didn't. Luckily there was an exact duplicate 69 floors bellow us "they will never find us...

    To be continued

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  14. Well, today we are doing a report on the great history museums secret room. (Walks over to the door and opens it) well as you can see their a broom... WAIT A BROOM YOU DUMMYS! THIS IS NOT THE SECERT ROOM IT IS THE CLEANING SUPPLY ROOM!! After he calmed down they double checked the sign that said NO ONE IS ALLOWED NOT EVEN STAFF. As we open the door we get prepared for what's going to be in there... What happens next?

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    1. It turned out that this was just the bathroom.

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  15. Then a Aliean jumps in to the air above them and runs away but what they are supposed about is what lies behind that monster it was a little egg that egg was about to hatch it finally broke open what they saw was....

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  16. I walked up a large flight of stairs. There had just been a report of someone trying to robb the temple. As I walked into the temple walls I saw a chisel that had been dropped on the floor. I looked closer and saw that the walls were made of gold. I kept walking forward looking around to see if there were any more clues. I saw a light footprint in the dust on the floor. I started to fallow the footprints. As I kept walking I was seeing large chucks chiseled out of the walls and roof. There were lots of footprints around 15 different footprints. There was one particularly large hole in the roof. As I looked at the floors I saw the footprints had disappeared. I figured that this was the escape route. I climbed out of the hole. I saw some horse footprints and a lot of human footprints. I saw a couple chunks of gold spilled on the ground. They must have escaped on horse. I saw a bullet shell on the ground. As I was looking around the area I saw a body that had been shot by a gun. The robbers must have shot the person casing them.
    .......To be continued........

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  18. "Come on Sammy" says Lindy "I don't really want to" I say "it seams dangerous" and scary but I don't tell Lindy the scary part she can be very judgemental. " Oh Sammy your such a worry wart" says Lindy "I am not I just don't feel like going in" I inform her "Urgg come ahhhh" she screams before she can finish her sentence. I dont know whats wrong at first but then I see a dark shadow looming over my shoulder. I run up the flight of stairs into the temple. This is the temple that Lindy really wanted me to go into, but I did not want to go into it. The dark shape is progressing on me, it makes sense because this thing is huge and I am not a very fast runner. I know i'm going to get caught but I keep running into the temple anyway. The temple is very dark and I can barely see a thing and due to the lack of light I run head on into a wall and the monster grabs me.

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    1. Ahhh! I started to thrash around and then it dropped me and I ran till i couldn't feel my feet,

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  19. CRACK!
    What was that? I hope it wasn't one of those stupid, preppy, no good, explorers again! They always come looking for treasure (blah blah blah) and "riches". I mean, what the heck? Sorry, I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Indigo Alnombak (look my last name up, it means something). My purpose here at the temple was to guard it, along with the rest of my people which are called the Calliope Clan.
    Guard it from what? You may ask. Well, we guard it from pesky, rotten, conceited, "explorers". Now, to you explorers are cool, and they "help" but to us they are a nuisance and our sworn enemies. They try to take this temple and turn it into a tourist attraction, when really this is our home! But they don't know that we live in it. We keep our selves a secret, so that we will not be put into what the humans call a "zo". Wait.... no that's not the word.... Hmmmm..... Oh! "zoo". Our leader, Chief Blue Boy, tells us about the humans. He says that they will take us into "labs" and run things called "tess" on us. Whoops, sorry, I meant "tests"! These human words are hard to pronounce!
    Anyway, we have a whole society in the temple. We have built a whole VILLAGE of huts and we live on a steady diet of herbs and meat that we hunt and gather outside.
    However, every once and a while, explorers, will discover this temple and we have to do anything to protect what is ours. Chief assembled a team of men to guard the temple from strangers. Notice how I said men? Well, I am the exception! I am the only girl on the guard. Yep. I know, it is very weird for a women, much less a 14 year old girl to be on a guard of men.

    Anyway, I was on duty near the entrance, when I heard a loud CRACK! I whipped around and spotted a.... boy! An outsider boy. He was not from my village. For a few seconds we stared at each other in shock. He had messy blond hair and was wearing what humans called a blue t-shirt and shorts. I could tell that he was frightened yet awed of me. Then I came to my senses. I ran straight at him and pinned him to the wall.
    He yelped, "Ah!" I could tell that he was surprised by my strength. The he smiled weakly and said slowly as if I couldn't understand, "I... mean... no... harm."
    "We can understand English, idiot." I snapped back. He was staring at me. I guess it was because of my guard paintings. Once you are excepted in to the guard, you have to paint these special paintings on your face. If you are young they paint a white star on your forehead and if you are an older member you have a white moon. I had a star with purple stripes on my cheeks.
    Just then Islo, a treasured member of the guard came.
    "What is going on Indigo?"
    "Intruder." I said nodding to the boy. His eyes widened in fear.
    "Well, I guess we have to do protocol and...."

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  20. As I am walking up these big thick steps I am wondering what it is like inside this building. At first i was thinking this is not a dream! There are post's with big devilish birds on them and there is a huge sign that is lit up saying "ENTER AT YOU OWN RISK" and a sentence saying "BOOK CLUB MEETS TODAY,APRIL 19TH 1897." I am wondering if anyone has been here sense 1897 that is a long time ago! I keep walking and open the door it is a really old door so old it came falling of when I touched it lightly. I walked in and everything was so clean it wasn't even dusty I yelled "HELLO" I didn't hear anything. so I kept yelling. I finally left after I walked around the entire building. I walked out and i didn't feel so good I almost puked!My hands started tingling and something shot out of it it was neon blue and sparkly, I thought it was magic and I was right! I got home and there was a spell book on my bed I read it all and I learned how to cast spells and it turns out if you walk around and touch things like I did well it has a chemical that can give you magical powers and well I got them so when ever you walk into a really old building be careful what you touch.
    THE END!

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  21. I am running away from home. I'm tired of my families ignorance. No one even notices me anymore after my stupid baby brother was born. It's all "aw look at you, your just the cutest!" and "look that's an apple, can you say A-P-P-L-E?" So I'm running away. My name is Cassie I am thirteen years old, I am out going and sporty for my age. If you didn't already get this I AM SO FED UP WITH THIS GOVERNMENT, THIS WORLD and my FAMILY! I'm not just doing the regular running away where you grab a knapsack and run out the door to some random place. No, no, no. I will be running from somewhere to somewhere. I'll be running to the temple of Tamizonia. It's mysterious and elegant, like me. Millions of people visit the temple everyday so it'll be the perfect hiding spot. I thought out my plan well and carefully... While I'm upstairs pretending to do homework, I will pack my backpack full of three days worth of clothes, (plus as many socks and undies as possible.) I will pack all my money and plenty of snacks in my lunch box. In the morning I get on the school bus and pretend to be a freshman and sneak off at the train station. In order to get on the train I'll tiptoe around all the commotion, and creep through the engine room till I'm aboard. Just to be safe I'll get of with all of the freshman's and walk the rest to the temple. I can hide out in the temple until I am feeling refreshed and satisfied. There was only one flaw in my plan as I was walking the stairs of the temple I totally forgot one thing. I was so wrapped up in my thoughts of spending the night in the temple, I forgot to watch where I was going. (This doesn't sound as bad as it actually is.) I totally ran into on of those CAUTION: Watch your step signs and fell right into a trap door. As I was screaming "AAHHHHHHHHH" I was silently scolding myself 'way to go Cassie you run away from home only to fall to your death' (THUD) Cassie hit the ground butt first...
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    1. I hit the ground hard and I mean hard enough to break a bone. I say to my self why did you have this dumb idea listening to sesame street would be less torture than this, all of the sudden I hear a slithering oh no. classic, pit of snakes, I should have known.
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  23. Hi, I'm Chamomile(my father is a tea maker)and my father and I have been climbing this temple for over an hour, to get an herb that is sworn to have mystic immortality. Wait, hold on whats that, is it the door YES! I wonder what it looks like inside? I've heard an ancient king lived there and covered the inside in gold and jewels, Ahhh I couldn't imagine what living there would be like! We get closer to the door and realize it was smaller in person, Uh Oh! That means we have to crawl! I kneel down close to the door and start to enter but wait, It smells so damp and foul! Ick! Better crawl fast! Once my father and I crawl a few feet the ceiling starts raising and I can almost stand, we walk quite a ways and we are right about to walk though a door then my father screams "WAIT!" but unfortunately it was to late because as soon as he yells I walk over the ledge and start Falling...........

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  24. I feel the last bead of sweat trickle down my face, as I take a sip of the refreshing water, so cool, so clear. My name is Skye and I am a national Geo graphic photographer, and I am at this large temple. I have no idea what it is the head of the photographers department told me to read as much as I could about this temple thing but reading is not one of my strong suites. Oh, well this is my turn to take the tour we walk through the tremendous halls and see strange carvings on the walls they look like high myths, I mean hieroglyphs well we will never know reading is not my strong suit. I decide to take a picture of them the torch on the wall gives it a perfect eerie light. I bend down to take the picture. "CLICK", "perfect". I stand up and the voice from the guide is gone the talking mouths of the tourists, they are all gone. I try to recall some of the rules that were in the heavy binder labels RULES well like I said reading is not my strong suit. All of a sudden the torch that I am standing by goes out. Oh great.

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  25. Many, many years ago...

    I aproached the many stairs looming above me, a package clung tightly to my chest. I started creeping up the stairs hoping to be unnoticed. Trees around the rocks seemed to taunt me. As I finally aproached the final couple stairs, I made my way towards an entrance and started to open the door. "Who are you, and what is your reason of being here?" The voice boomed from above, causing me to jump and almost drop the precious package held in my hand. I was still out of breath from climbing the endless stairs and it took lots of work for me to utter these few words. "I am Kind Obars first hand man and I come to deliver you a package as a gift from our village of Meza, to yours." I stood there for what seemed to be like hours before the doors slowly opened, to reveal a man standing right behind them blocking me from seeing anything else but him. "Verry well then, I can take your package to him personally and tell him that you were here." His voice supprised me to be the same one as before. "No, no, it's no hastle at all for me to take it to him, if you just show me the way-" " Oh no it would really be better this way." He interuppted me in a very worried tone. "Umm, okay.." He said reluctantly. He snatched the package out of my hands gave me a shove out the door and shut them quickly, before I could say a word. I slowly backed away from the doors looking at the other parts of the building. Something was wrong with that situation, VERY WRONG. He was obvoisly trying to hid something from me, particually what was going on behing him. I needed to tell the king! I quickly dashed down the stairs, everything looking much less scary, but more odd. Once I reached the bottom of the stairs I stoped for a second to even out my breating before running off again. I sprinted the many miles back to my village, dashing through rivers and groves of trees. Once I reached the King's temple I ran quicker than I ever had before into his office. "Son plese be careful!" He said with a chuckle. "This is no time for laughing!" I screamed. "Alright," he said with a worried look on his face. "Tell me what happened." I unfolded the dtails of my uncounter very specifically. "Wow you may have been more effected than I was thinking ou would be." He said after a long pause. "What!?" I questioned, utterly confused. "I think it's time we tell you." "Tell me what?" HE paused, "what really goes on behind those doors........"

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  26. i walk in and find ancient candy and then find my ancient family and we walk to a lot of doors and find a droller in the sand and then we find a rat

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  27. My name is Beatrice prior I am 17 years old. I am walking up steps and I stumble and My friend Elle grabs my arm and says " are you ok you have been falling a lot, I know we are at the Louvre." As I reach the top of the stairs I see the Mona Lisa. It is the most wonderful painting I have ever laid my eyes on. As we go to see more painting a alarm goes off and when we try to get out of there we see that the Mona Lisa is gone. We saw a gard and we tell him " Mona Lisa a été volé." Which means the Mona Lisa has been stolen

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  28. As I am hiking one summer day, I wander off from my family. I start to get worried because I can't find them. I shout their names one by one, "Mom!?" Dad?!" "Penny?". I venture through the dense forest thinking to myself, "Will this ever end up somewhere?". I start to walk into a thick cloud. and I fall down. I wake up the next morning at some sort of camp. There are other people there, really tall people. I stand up and start walking forward... I bang into something hard immediately. I fall backwards and am knocked unconscious. When I wake back up, I realize that I am trapped in a glass box. The unusually tall people see me and they stomp over. They pick up the box and shake it, like they are trying to torture me. I fall out of the box through a small opening that appears at the bottom of the box. I hit the gravel with a ~THUD!~ I spring off the ground and wipe the dirt off my butt as I am running towards this tall, elegant building. There are at least three hundred stairs that I will have to climb to reach the top.
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    As I reach the top of the stair I open a large steel door. Or at least I try to open. I open the door enough to slip through the crack in the bottom of the door. I slip inside. I open my mouth in awe as I walk forward. There are millions and millions of precious gems. I walk forward to grab one........


    CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  30. So I go to a museum with my friends. By the way, my name is Shawn and my are friends Judas and Milo. So anyway we walk into this temple like museum and there are some weird things. Skull security cameras and leather floor mats. We go look at and some cool face type thing that is kind of creepy. Milo is one of those talkative stupid if I may kind of people. So anyway he's playing around with the face and I remember that the first sign entering the museum said "Please Don't TOUCH". So I said something to Judas and once he tries to tell Milo it's to late, Milo activated something on the face and Boom we hit the floor. We realize it was some button so we look up and the trapdoor above us closes. We are in a hallway with two ways to go. One way there are some torches and the other way there is a little light. Milo yells "it's the light at the end of the tunnel" "Shut Up" Judas says. For a second everything was quiet and there was some pretty scary noises. I think Milo might of had an accident in his pants. After everyone takes a little time to calm down, we start waking towards the light. We open the old rusty steel and wood door at the end of the tunnel, as it creek's open Milo starts shaking so I slap him across the face. We keep walking and Milo starts talking about the toys he got for Christmas. Me and Judas tell him to stop talking. So we start hearing more noises. Milo starts crying and all the sudden we hear a loud "Ha Ha Ha"...

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  31. I am walking up these stairs and just looking for the door. Picturing in my mind what the inside of this amazing building. I get to the door my mouth drop's...
    To be continued.
    By Aiden,D

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  33. Modern day
    Character: Cane Marsham

    I had been trained since I was just 3 to become a Pratek. They are the guards that keep the riches of our country safe from others. Most Prateks, like me, have hidden abilities that people must never find out about. One of my friends can shape shift, and another is invisible. But me, I can run FAST! I’m not kidding. When I was 1, I could run just as fast as any grown man. When others, such as the king heard about me, they whisked me out of the orphanage as fast as possible. I was then brought to a secret training facility where I trained with other people who also possessed “powers.” Now that I am 13, my training is finished and I am one of the few who passed the test to become a vault guard.

    As I walk up the steps to the temple the fact that my life will be changed forever dawns on me. Every instinct in my body tells me to run, but I don’t. Besides, there is nowhere to run to anyway. When I reach the first level of trees, I stop and go stand at the first one in the third column. I have been instructed to wait until a man with a camera asks to take my picture. When he does I am supposed to follow him to the secret entrance of the temple. At around 4:00 he comes. His reddish-brown hair is tucked neatly under a hat and he wears a pair of khakis. If I didn’t know outerwise, I would of thought he was a tourist. Tourists unfortunately, are also what keeps the treasures hidden here safe. Either way you turn you’ll see one of them, and if they weren’t here people would get suspicious.

    The man brings me to the top of the temple, and then he just sits down on one of the steps. I have been taught to be patient, so I stop walking and sit down next to him. Together we wait, and finally, just as the last tourists are leaving, he gets up and walks to the edge of the temple. This is what catches most people’s eye. A beautiful, rushing waterfall flows from about halfway down, cascading into a small pool. The man stares at it and smiles. Then he turns to look at me and jumps off the side! He plummets down, down, down. Just as he is about to hit the water he spreads out his arms and stops in midair. I am at a loss for words. Is he dead? It seems like some sort of net has caught him. All of a sudden he rolls over and gives me a thumbs up. I think he wants me to jump, but I’m not sure if I should. I decide to do it, and I leap off the ledge into midair.


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  34. I was falling for about 30 seconds going at least 40 miles per our. I was nearly reaching death until the unusual force caught me. My arms and legs spread out. The man was over by a very tall door. I rolled over as he the man and stood a couple feet behind him. He knocked on the door, and to a surprise, it swung open leading to more than 100 people standing with bows, spears, machetes, you name it. But the most terrifying thing was that they were all pointed at me

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  35. Legend has it that in the top of this temple, lies all the ancient gifts and treasures that the Egyptians left for the gods. Millions and millions of dollars worth of treasure in that top room. So I set off with my explore team to climb these ancient stairs and do what nobody's ever done before, see whats inside. I take the first step carefully, making sure no traps are there. Slowly I make my way up the stairs with the video cameras right behind me, capturing everything I do. Finally I made it up to the twentieth step when I hear a loud bang. After that nothing seemed to happen, and for a second I thought it was just the wind. A few seconds later a slithering sound came and I was frozen it fright. King Cobras slithered my way with a sssssssssss. My explore team ran away, but it was to late for me . They were already surrounding me. The only thing I could do was jump over them. I gathered up enough courage to take a step where they weren't on the stairs. Another step followed by another step in till it was the last step and I'd be safe (for now) Very, very slowly I reached my leg over the biggest patch of them. The patch was to big. I had to jump. I thought about all the shiny treasures. 1,2,3... no, I can't. 1,2,3 JUMP! I jumped and felt something mushy under my shoe. I look down and I had stomped on one of the biggest of them all. All the Cobras hissed and started slithering towards me. I had killed there king! They started slithering really fast and I started running up the stairs. Sprinting up the stairs I heard another click and out came knives from the walls, high and low. I kept running because if I stopped running for a second, knives would be flying into me. I was about five stairs to the top when I heard another click. The next thing I know, I'm in water. I get out soaking wet and I'm in a dark room with one torch. I took the torch and started walking down the long dark hallway. I was near the end when something gleamed in the firelight on the left. I turned, and there, standing right in front of me was piles and piles of gold and treasure. My mouth drops and I think to myself: Almost dying twice was actually worth all this gold and treasure!

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  36. "Jackson wait up, We're almost to the top we need to stick together!"
    As we reached the top of the temple we start seeing more and more people. We walk inside the temple and there's little caves that you can go into.
    "Let's go in that one" Jackson says pointing to the cave behind me. We head into the cave, it starts getting darker and darker the farther we walk. All of a sudden my feet start getting wet, my shoes are soaked. Then I see a light in the distance.
    "What is that Josie?" Jackson asked
    "I don't know, let's go see"
    The closer we get to the light the deeper the water gets.
    " Jackson, do you want to turn around? The water is getting really deep and I'm getting kind of cold."


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  37. Today is day four of the archaeological dig. In the past days, we have so far cleared most of the vegetation and formed a grid on the areas below the ziggurat, the rectangular towers on top of the possible temples. Our team has not yet found information on what is inside of the ziggurat. Today, we will carefully excavate the collapsing entrances and travel inside the antechamber. Well, maybe not. Lila is coming towards us and she doesn't look happy, like she usually is when we begin a project. "Under no circumstances should anyone cross the main stairway; the steps at the top possibly have no support systems at all, and if anyone should cross them, they will probably collapse from under that person," said Lila, the main excavator. "Our carbon dating department has concluded that the ziggurat was built in the end of the third millennium BC, and many of the main support systems have collapsed, including the ones on the main stairway. For now, instead of excavating the collapsing entrances we will continue our artifact grid search until we know more about the support systems underneath the ziggurat." Lila then walks away from the excavating group and towards another department. We then head toward the nearby grid panel and it from what we can see the department there has found wild ibex bones. As I look past the uncovering of the bones, I can see the ziggurat, and someone is climbing the steps! They are slinking up one of the ramps that leads to the main temples of the ziggurat. I slowly pull myself away from the group, and head towards the ziggurat. When I arrive there, I can see the outlines of the person with much more detail. The person wears a large hat to protect their face from the hot sun, or possibly to conceal their face from any unwanted onlookers. Ignoring what Lila has told me, I start to climb the stairs, because they so far have held the person climbing high above me. The person tilts their heads backwards, and I freeze. I cannot yet see the face of the person, but they do the unexpected and beckon for me to come closer. I do, but the next step I take collapses, and I fall into a small pit without any light.

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  38. I am climbing the steps to enter this amazing building and I have 4 friends that gone in the temple with me they are tyson,Natasha,and harrison. We founds some weird stuff in the temple. And harrison got lost in the temple and it is a maze in the temple and then we found the end of the maze and we found harrison at the end of the maze THE END

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  39. As I climb the steps into the temple, my heart starts to pound my legs turn to jelly and I begin to worry, what could be in here, what if I don't make it out alive? I'm in a tour group with 5 other people including the tour guide, what could possibly happen i'll be fine. We walked into a small room, torches lighting the paths. A sudden rush of wind enters the room and all of the torches blow out, everyone screams in fear. I drop my backpack on the ground in front of me and knelt down to find the matches I had in case something like this ever happened. I pulled the matches out of the small zip up compartment of my bag and lit one. I put the flame to the top of my torch and passed it around until all the torches were lit. When we were sure all the torches were lit we noticed something, we were missing someone, where had they gone? After about an hour of searching we gave up and started on our way through the temple again. There were 4 more rooms we stopped in until we got to the exit of the temple. In every room someone ended up disappearing until we got to the fifth room, it was just me and the tour guide all alone everyone else was gone. Suddenly the lights went out, I heard another scream and a voice that whispered to me "For you are the only survivor, for you shall be thankful there are no more passages" and with that the torches caught fire again and the voice was gone, there was no one to be found, I was all alone.

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  40. "John told ya' this place wasn't just a present for hi wife this thing is gonna leave us stacked!"
    "heck ya' just watch out it was probably trapped by the Babylonians."
    "Sure, sure just shut your yapper and lets go!"
    58.9783478 minutes later
    "JOHN?"
    Nothing except the noise of this net swinging.
    "Well as soon as I grabbed this golden chalice I swear I fell for 21.3537467837 minutes."



    What will happen next? Continue the story.

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  41. "Why did you talk me into this?" Wait… before we keep going, let me introduce myself. My name is Wanda. I love to dance, am super goofy and I love to adventure. My best friend is named Emily but, for some reason everyone calls her moo. She loves to dance, eat candy, be crazy, and drive me crazy sometimes ;) ! Now that you have met us, let's get back to the story. "Moo, why did you get us into this?" "We are lost and we can't find this "Magical" building the wizard claimed to be around here." "Don't worry Wanda I got this." "Emily, how come whenever you say "Ive got this, it usually means you DON'T got it." "Hey, being lost is no reason to be hurtful!" "I'm sorry moo, I just am upset. We have been walking forever and there still is no buildi… and suddenly I saw it! "There, there in the distance it's the magical building just asa we had imagined it, closer than ever!" "Wanda… you stole that from the Wizard of Oz's." "Sorry, I'm just so excited to finally be here!" But, as they walked into the building something happened. Something oh, so terrible happened. It turned out the wizard was so sick and tired of the two girls talking to him about how amazing their friendship was, that he sent them to the building of hate. So as soon as they walked into the building they forgot they were best friends, and ran in two different directions.

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  42. Me and a couple other adventurers were climbing this beautiful building. Once we made it to the top of the stairs on this hot hot day we made our way into the first little tunnel. it was really cool just a hall it was lit up with a lantern that had cobwebs all over it. You could see roots coming up through the old tile it was dusty and did not really has a smell. We made it through and looked back one more time and started our way up the second stair case looking at all the pebbles on the stairs and having small talk. once we made up the second stair case we were thinking about turning around so we would get down in time but I persuaded them to get going. As we were walking into the second tunnel their was no lights so we could could not turn back now we went a step in and I felt uneasy about something. as we were walking through we figured out that there was two doors and so one of my partners Savannah, said "we should go see whats inside!" my other partner Lilliana angrily said "are you crazy! We are in the dark we can't see anything and what if someting bad is in there?" I just had to chime in and said "guys calm down Savannah we can go in the door and Lilliana, you can stay out here" "sounds good" Savannah said with what I was assuming was a shrug "fine" Lilliana said "but if you get trapped don't think i'm going to get you i am waiting on the other side" " okayyy" Savannah said with a mimic like voice lets go I said. As we walked in we were both dead silent we could only here the sould of our steps but then we stopped in our tracks "did you here that?" I asked "no, what?" "listen" we both went quiet i grabbed her arm they listened and then finally they heard something they heard breathing they both took a step and I tripped and screamed "what" Savannah said "I tripped help me she reached for me missed then again and she got me me heard a growl and screamed they both ran out on our way out I heard "ow" it was Savannah "anni, you okay?" "yeah lets just go" in a matter of seconds we were out. "what happened to you guys!" Lilliana said with a worried face "we went in the door and we heard breathing the I tripped and fell and it was something furry then we came out" I told her "whats on your leg!" Lilliana said with gasp I looked down and Savannah had a big gash in her leg "wow" I said blankly "Is that what you said ow for?" "No, Of course it is!" Savannah softly yelled. After we got Savannah cleaned up we realized we were at the top it was so beautiful we stayed and sat for a little bit then it started to get dark we all stood up and I looked down and said "now, how are we going to get back down?".

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  43. Wow, this will be a amazing photo for instagram, I say as I take a picture of a creepy statue. Jim I feel like you are totally obsessed your phone and not the least bit concerned about getting out of here, yeah whatever, I say, thats when I see it, a boulder coming strate for us. I duck into a side corridor, then all the lights go out, I shout for my friend kyles name but no oe anwers.

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  44. I am an archeologist. I'm exploring this temple. This adventure makes me feel like I'm Indiana jones there must be something that needs to be in a museum and it must be worth a fortune.

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  45. i am walking up the stairs of the temple i go inside and a priest tells me the god is happy to see me and then the priest said i need to pay so i give him crops;]

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    1. then i go down to da village and do work and then enemy soldiers come and attack the village and our soldiers attack them ...

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  46. I slowly walk up the stairs and they creak loudly and eerily. I get have way up and here a loud growl "huh nope!"
    I run down the stairs and see the monks who are now staring at me awkwardly I yell! "get A exterminator up in here!"

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  47. I am walking up the long, carrying steps when I see flames flash up in front of me. I frantically jump back, worrying what will happen next. I keep walking, considering that I am an archaeologist I need to keep going. I finally reach the temple, backing away from any fire that blazes at me. I put my hand on the door handle and snap my hand back from hot, hot, pain and burn on my hand. While I am quivering from the burn, I feel a door fall under me. "NOOO" I yell. I am in so much pain,but I know I need to keep going. I walk back up the stairs, slowly, but still moving, looking at my scratches and bruises. I walk in the door and I cant believe what I see. "AHHHH"And with that I run out the door.

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  48. As I climb the stairs to this amazing temple My friend Fred says look out I feel like this place has a lot of traps. We get inside and the first trap gets sprung. The floor starts falling and I start running Fred gets frozen in place with fear and falls. There goes Fred. Then the next trap gets sprung and the walls start closing in. I start running and realize I have know chance of getting out of here. There is a boulder coming strait for me. I turn around and run the other way. Then I remember the floor is not there. I jump and get one hand on the other side of the trap. I pull myself up and run out the exit. I am never going back in there again.

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  49. I find this very interesting building i walk up the many stairs i actually counted how many stairs there where 343 exactly i find this huge door and of course i just have to walk through it so i walk into the huge building i was pitch black i walked a couple steps more into the building then huge torches light up with Hot fire! but it is still really dark i try to pick up one of the torches but it is very hot so i just keep walking into the dark building then i here a weird slithering sound and i feel something weird on my toes and i see a snake i run for my life and i see a sign dont go passed this sign but of course i am very curious i keep going and i find a rope i was comfused i thought it was fine so i walked on it and it was a trap i manged to get out of it with a few scratches i keep running i find a wall of art it was so beautiful and then i see a light i am finally at the end but so thought.

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  50. I am walking up the stairs of the temple. i noticed there two manny stairs so i get tired but i keep on going. as i go on my journey i finally get to the top i go inside and i find a black bear i try to give it watermellon and the black bear attakks me so i take the watermellon back then i throw the watermolone at the the black bear. and annyways after that animal atakk i find some people and they asked me to stay and be thier friend there nasmes are piper taylor tears.

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  51. When me and Percy set foot in to temple we heard bbzzzz.
    we walked down a long hallway and I almost stepped on a pressure plate but percy stopped me. I knelt down and pressed the pressure plate and it swooped down from above but it did not catch any of us. I pressed the pressure plate again and it swooped back up the other way.

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  52. I walk up the steps and I see a lot of pigs.
    I look around all I see is pigs.
    I love pigs

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  53. as a walk up the steps i can see the hole village and all of the green trees.as i keep on going up the steps the village got bigger and bigger as i keep going up.and finally got to the top i can see the hole world and all the houses were so small and know i have to get down now

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  54. As I ran up the stairs someone was chasing me trying to kill me, So I ran as fast as I could. My shoes came untied and I tripe as he comes closer he pulls out a gun and shouts, he killed me, as I lie there starting to die I think, what about my family, is someone going to find me before I die?

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  55. "I've Made It ! I cant believe I've actually made it to the temple! On all my journeys Ive never seen something as amazing as this!" Rick exclaimed "The first time in thousands of years I am the first explorer to ever reach these lands. I guess I should check inside?" As Rick climbs the steps Rick notices a multiple of things. As he walks up the stairs he feels as if there is nearby movement, almost as if some thing or some one is inside. Upon walking further Rick notices trees on the temple. He walks further to the door.He finds a small tower. While walking, a quick movement can clearly be heard and a shadow can be seen at the top...

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  56. We were trapped! The lights turned on. "Where are you from?" The voice seemed like it was comeing from everywhere at once. "Who is it I yelled?!" The shadow returns the favor and asks, "The better question is who are you?" Cora yells back, "All we know is that the swat will be here in a few minutes. Have fun staring at bars your whole life." The guy walks out of the shadows and says, "Don't worry they won't catch me." Then vanishes. " Stop right there it's the swat" " There is nobody here he just left. Thank god your here." I say.

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